Post by John Canton on Aug 11, 2012 17:58:40 GMT -5
1. Wrong forum. Use the writer's forum. This is for columns on the site.
2. Don't start paragraphs with "so" and even sentences shouldn't be started with so. It's more of a transition word. Most of the time you don't even need it in the sentence you have.
3. Too many long winded sentences. Shorten them. Edit your work more and you will find them. If something doesn't sound good to you, read it out loud and you'll spot it easier.
I'm in a rush, but those are some things to consider.
2. Don't start paragraphs with "so" and even sentences shouldn't be started with so. It's more of a transition word. Most of the time you don't even need it in the sentence you have.
3. Too many long winded sentences. Shorten them. Edit your work more and you will find them. If something doesn't sound good to you, read it out loud and you'll spot it easier.
I'm in a rush, but those are some things to consider.